I read something over on storyfix.com that made me cringe. He has posted his feedback on a manuscript HERE. Looking at his list of “nothing screams beginner writer than _____” list, that’s what I am. I’m cringing because I can SEE what other people (people in the writing business that KNOW) see.
Okay I have clicked on the Here button twice. It take me to a critique of a Story called “Mountain Son” Is that you? I see nothing about a beginning writer.
I have no idea what you’re seeing. Try going to storyfix.com and scroll down to the post entitled “A Vicarious Story Coaching Experience.” When my cursor hovers over the link, it shows the proper website, and I go right to it. Weird.
Oops – I see what you’re seeing now. Yes, you ARE looking at the right thing – he has been allowed to take us through his critique of another writer’s work. It’s enlightening.